AEChronicle

Aww, don't laugh at me :D Please clarify for me, though; are these your own thoughts and emotions, or that of something you've thought up?

Sounds like you've put some thought into this. Since it's a short story, and you don't have more chapters to explain this to your reader, it might be a good ...

Yah, to and too is my most frequent grammatical mistake.

First off, thanks for the review. As to your two questions: 1. The Roika are supposed to be kept in the dark here. We won't meet them until a little ...

I get what your saying about the conflicting POV's. It's the biggest problem I have, as everything makes sense in my head since I'm writing it, but it doesn't make ...

Hm, this prologue has a lot of potential as far as I can see, but the questions I'm going to ask here is. Is this prologue really necessary? You must ...

Hm, this prologue has a lot of potential as far as I can see, but the questions I'm going to ask here is. Is this prologue really necessary? You must ...

Lol, I hadn't thought about putting it in the Romantic category making it obvious. I think I'll change that :)

If I watched out for my punctuation, what would you have to review? Thanks again for taking the time to read this, again. And boy did you find a few ...

All right.

Sweet, can't wait to read it.

There's a lot of people like us out there, believe it or not. We're not alone :)

Yes, I agree with that as well. But poetry is art, and you cannot say that taking your brush and swiping some black paint back and forth is art. I ...

Didn't expect that. I guess you don't really want reviews, then?

What, it has an 'a' in it? :) I do stuff like that all the time.