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Aasthik

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Adventures of India

    @Snoink & AzaleaLexis: Thanks for going through the poem and expressing your views :) Will help me improve!

    Jan 20, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Adventures of India

    Hi! Anyway, capitalization hints that there is something big going on and that the word is very important. Which may be the case! But, there were an awful lot of ...

    Jan 20, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Adventures of India

    Hey Aasthik! I'm terrible at reviewing poetry, but I just wanted to say that was a fun poem to read. And hey, fellow Indian, welcome to YWS! Hi AzaleaLexis, It ...

    Jan 20, 2012


akdsjfh you know that feeling where you start writing a scene but then you get bored with the scene so you move on and start writing a different scene and then you get bored with that scene so you move on to an entirely different WIP and then you get bored with that so you move on-
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