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Re: Time flies by
Hi Watermelonspots. Welcome to YWS! I hope you get some good reviews here, as well as do a bit of reviewing, yourself. I really like this poem. It's short and ...
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Re: Halló!
Hi Anna! Welcome to the Young Writers' Society! It's okay if English isn't your best; that's what the site is for! It's so cool that you're from Iceland, and it ...
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Re: Interlude
Hi OhSoSqueamish! I'll go through and edit some things in red, first. It was the silence that scared him more than anything. Just five minutes ago they had been running ...
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Re: What, Is It?
Hi Ilyaeelz. I think I'll edit the punctuation a bit, because it doesn't exactly flow right with the comma positioning you used. The warmth, as of a hearth (song)? The ...
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Re: Suggested Word Count!
I try to write about 1,500 a day on NaNo. If I'm at a high point in my story, I can write maybe 5,000 words in a day. On a ...
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Re: Pointless Ranting
Hi Way2Dawn! Snoink just about covered it. I'll just go through and edit a few things. So sad to see that today , true art, music, literature, and culture are ...
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Re: long road to my heart
Hi SoulRider! Welcome to the Young Writers' Society! I hope you will get some good reviews here, as well as do a bit of reviewing, yourself. Wish to see you ...
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Re: Silly Band Hearbreak
Hi LittlePetRock! How cute! This is a very sweet little ... um ... uh ... article thingy. But I think that if this lacks anything, it's a purpose. Is it ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
Known for having elegant handwriting and a cool avvie.
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Heart and Vines
Hi MissMystery! Welcome to YWS! I hope you get some good reviews here, as well as do a little bit of reviewing yourself. I love the idea behind this drawing, ...
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Re: Tribute to Michael
I am ecstatic! I love Michael Jackson! You should see my bedroom wall and all the Michael posters I have! He was the best. Fashion and taste changed as though ...
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Re: Captured Spirit Light
Sweet! You did a great job making whatever is in her hands -- the Spirit Light, if you will -- seem to glow. Did you take the photo of the ...
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Re: Key to my Heart
Hi Kr1117! I really, really like these, and I applaud the fact that you even attempted drawing hands. I'm not saying that I'm great at drawing hands, but remember, I'm ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: About the best I could EVER do.
Hi Isha! I hope you had a good party! Well, on with the review! 1. How did you get a photo of a frog on a perfectly pink flower? I ...
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Re: At the Zoo-Pelicans
Hi Persephoneia! The last two re-sized just fine ... 1. I like the subject of this picture, and I applaud the fact that you could catch a pelican in this ...
Sep 7, 2010
