Abigail_W.

Hi Theotherone! Welcome to the Young Writers' Society! I hope you'll get some good reviews here, and I can see you've already started reviewing, yourself! Nice work! I like this ...

Thanks everyone for the reviews! They're greatly appreciated.

Whoa. This was amazing. I mean, jaw-dropping. I think the main problem with this poem is formatting. You had me pausing at weird intervals. Here's an idea: raw limbed and ...

Hi TheNewHero! I like this, and I'm sure everyone here on YWS can sympathise. I agree with BenFranks; you have commas everywhere. I'm going to have to be blunt, though; ...

Hi Mikaylakk25! I think I'll go through and edit some things in red, first. Maya picked at her turkey sandwich while studying for her science test. The test was next ...

Hi LukanRinta! How are you? I think this is my favorite poem of yours. I'm trying to find something wrong with it, but I really, honestly can't detect very many ...

Hi Adeera! I know this was posted a really long time ago, so sorry if you don't end up seeing this. I really liked these. It's nice to see cartoons ...

Hi Dange93! Hmm, let's see ... O Catholic Religion how great you are! What love oozes from your veins. Nothing is blind to you, even though those who use logic ...

Hi Originalhobbit! This poem flows so well that I couldn't help but say it out loud. The rhymes fall off the tongue without being too stiff and forced, which is ...

Hi LukanRinta! I'll just go through and edit some things in red, first. As I struggle to get free, I think about the last two weeks. You need to be ...

Hi Dreambig_andeiita! I really like this. It flows well and sort of rolls of the tongue -- or mind, I guess, if you're reading it aloud. I sort of get ...

Well, what everyone else said! The only other flaw that I can see is that "2" should be "two." Depending on style, using digits instead of writing out the numbers ...

Hi TPak! First things first, I love your little signature thingy on top of your avatar. I agree. I have never been a Harry Potter fan or a Twilight fan. ...

Well, I agree with Dream_Catcher. But it's okay if a poem is elementary; maybe it was intended for elementary readers. The main thing wrong with this poem is the lack ...

Hi Palantalid! I might recommend that you repost "Coffee Stain" and "Cruel is the Night" in separate topics. It's really a lot to ask someone to review two long poems ...