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Abigail_W.

  • Art & Photography Re: Vysehrad Numba 2

    Hi Persephoneia! I absolutely love love love these. 1. How did you get this angle? It's spectacular! However, it's crooked. This isn't a problem, though, because you can use Photoshop ...

    Sep 4, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Where do we go?

    Well, what PenguinAttack said! I must admit I know exactly what you're talking about. I think I can give you a couple tips on how to make this seem more ...

    Sep 4, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Political Correctness: Drawing the Line

    Hi BenFranks! I hope this review doesn't come out sounding too condescending. It's really not supposed to be. Because, you know, you're the non-fiction guru and I'm nothing close to ...

    Sep 4, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: really bad....

    Hi Calligraphy! First, I have to ask you: do you like to draw? Do you enjoy drawing? If so, never, ever say you're bad at it. People tend to try ...

    Sep 4, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Betrayed

    Hi Kitrosemon13! I love this! It has a very nice beat; have you considered making it into a song? I think I'll go through and edit some technical stuff ... ...

    Sep 4, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: My Garden

    Aye aye aye! I agree with Kaedee. I'd be more than willing to critique your photographs once you resize them; I'm sure they're wonderful -- that is, from what I ...

    Sep 3, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Like a flowing river

    Hi ItsMeNathalie! It is so sweet that you wrote this for your boyfriend. I'm sure he'll love it. I really can't find anything wrong with this poem. It has a ...

    Sep 3, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Just A Little Something (2)

    Hi Borntoshop! This is the biggest rule I've learned about photography: It doesn't matter if the subject of a photo is beautiful. It simply doesn't matter. I can't stress this ...

    Sep 3, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Ferris wheel

    Hi Retrodisco666! I love this poem! The only things you really need to fix up are the technical mistakes. Fairground rides make broken hearts, or so I have come to ...

    Sep 3, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Random new pics

    Hi everyone! Thanks for the critiques; I love ways to improve. The second is kind of boring, plus her leg looks really muscular. I know, it's really weird, because in ...

    Sep 3, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Adirondacks to New York City

    Hi Glimmerglass! This is really striking. This is brilliant! Haikus are really hard to write. For some reason, most people just can't manage to fit all of their thoughts on ...

    Sep 2, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Ideas

    Hi Iamnotperfect! I like this. I really don't think it's that weird. I like the way it flows a lot. It's really hard to get a poem to flow without ...

    Sep 2, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Random new pics

    Just a few random pics I took. I used a film Canon Rebel 2000.

    Sep 2, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Flowers I know you see them all the time

    Hi Adeera! You have some very nice photos here! I know I have some conflicting opinions with Emmylou1995, so I apologize for that, but just humour me for a few ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Fashion Design!

    Hi Mangawolf! It is so cool that you're into fashion design! I really like your character. And I agree with Retrodisco666 -- Kayla does seem like a good name for ...

    Aug 31, 2010


hmm i think i just have to start typing and hopefully a poem will fall out of me
— spottedpebble