Abigail_W.

What were review teams? I had a YWS hiatus and missed that ...

Very funny. I don't agree with all of the points here, but it was well executed and hilarious. My only problem is all the different colors. They hurt my eyes! ...

Sorry RoarShark, I don't have time to read this right now, but to livurdestiny: when giving reviews, it isn't beneficial to the author and you will be reported if you ...

Hey Wariofart. I know nothing about writing plays, so I can only give you advice on the plot in general. So, you have a good idea. It's obviously unique and ...

I have a terrible habit of actually believing in the existence of fictional characters. I mean, deep down inside, I know they're imaginary, but I think about books and characters ...

Aw, it's so sweet of you to write your little cousin a poem! I really do hope he overcomes his illness and leads a happy, healthy life. Your flow and ...

Very good! I'm not sure how the contest goes, but my only recommendation would be to fill in the white spaces. I know it's pretty hard with Paint. You should ...

Wow, that's great! I haven't read the novel, so I don't think I can give too detailed of a review on this. All I can say is that you are ...

Hey Becca! Before I do anything else, I'm just going to go through and correct some simple things. Since this is a university admissions essay, the grammar, spelling, and punctuation ...

Hi epseon! I have to say, I'm impressed that you wrote a Shakespearean sonnet. From experience, I know that those are very difficult to write. I love the idea of ...

When the rain won't come and clothes hang -- limp dishrags; curtains sag; walls stick like a half-eaten plum. I don't rest. Even when the rain comes and there's a ...

Hi SubjectBlue! I pretty much agree with everything Jas said about the rhyme scheme and the rhythm. When I first read the poem, I thought I was going to hate ...

Hello! Back by request... I love the contrasting colors and, as I said before, you really can't go wrong with sunsets. My only suggestion would maybe be to adjust your ...

Hey VitaminCakes! You requested my review, so here I am! I love the first photo. You did a great job with the fading and the focus and everything. I personally ...

Hi tgirly! I'm really stunned by your rhyme scheme on this. It's probably the most uniquely rhyming poem I've ever read, and I think I like it. It's almost like ...