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Re: Yours and Mine
Hi Kiicoh! I like this poem, and I beg to differ from Dr. Jamie Bondage; repetition is not necessarily incorrect grammar. Even if it was incorrect grammar, it would be ...
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Re: Pacific Bliss
Hi VitaminCakes! You are so unbelievably lucky to live half a mile away from such a gorgeous beach. The first photograph is my favorite. I really have a thing for ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: The artist and the surgeon.
Hi Retrodisco666. First things first, I'll go through and edit some technical things. The surgeon is the artist and has talent with the blade. The man with the palette has ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: My Soul Soars to the Sky
Hey Crimson! I have one correction, but it's pretty vital: your soul sours to the sky. Sour isn't a verb, unfortunately. Hmm. That's kind of funny, though. I couldn't imagine ...
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Re: Kneel
Hey Emmyloud1995! This is just fabulous. When I read the first line of this poem, I thought about clicking away, because usually poems that talk about themselves being poems are ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Beatrix Potter drawings.
Ooh, AquaMarine, these are fabulous! 1. For the bird, I can only think of two little things you could do to improve. Maybe erase the little wisps of pencil markings ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: A Trip To Vysehrad
Hey Persephoneia! These photos seem very nice, but I couldn't exactly enjoy them because they were so big! You can learn how to resize a photo here ... or here ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Shino
Oof. Resize the photos and more reviews will come. From what I can see of this photo, though, it looks to be good. That is, however, from what I can ...
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: Suburbia
Hiya! I'm usually very wary of reviewing you green guys's pieces ( :p ) but -- hey! -- I guess I'll give it a go. The biggest thing I have ...
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: The Moon Elves
Amazing! This is absolutely fabulous. You won't mind if I make just a couple comments, do you? The boy's face is a little wonky. He has kind of a pointy ...
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: The Widow (Please review!)
Hi Huff Puff! I'm here upon request. Sorry I haven't gotten around to writing your review yet. All of the technical stuff has been pretty much cleared up, so I'll ...
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: My drawings!
Hi Anigamer02! Welcome to YWS! Unfortunately, I tried clicking all of the links, but none of them brought me to an image -- only to a blank grey screen. Perhaps ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: Why I Hate August
Hi xXShadowPeopleXx, I'll be reviewing for you today! Hi, I’m Alexander Ford; please just call me Alex. And yes, it’s Ford like the vehicles: however, I hate Fords ! I’m ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Miss Priss
Wow! You did this on Paint.net? I epicly fail there. *Applause* However, this is way too big. It is so hard to view! I want other people to view your ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: The Sound Of Silence
Hi Kingolions! I like this poem very much, and I find it very easy to relate to. How loud is the beat of silence so loud inside my mind. I'm ...
Aug 13, 2010
