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Hey PenguinAttack. Maybe you could break this up into shorter sections, because not many YWSers are going to have the time to read a whole big chunk of work right ...

Whoa! That was awesome! The metaphor, everything! However, it wasn't exactly poetry. I mean, it didn't have line breaks or figurative language -- except, of course, for the underlying metaphor. ...

Aw, this is so sweet! There is just one line that I don't quite get ... God, why did you take her first and leave me to cry, with my ...

Oh, no! Your picture isn't there anymore! It was moved or blocked by Photobucket! I know this is ages old, but I want to review it. :) I absolutely love ...

Hi Chazzer! I can find only two little mistakes. (I love the icon, by the way.) I’m a child in the corner and I’m scared. I am scared. You’re the ...

Hi Jon! Nice poem you have here! Aside from what Shepherd said, I can see only two little flaws. Perhaps not flaws, but bruises, or weak spots. In any even ...

Hi Leftnoa! I didn't really get this poem, but not all poetry is meant to be "gotten." I see myself as crippled You don't need the word "as" here. Tripping ...

Yes, Flower~Child, I agree with Suzanne about it being a line from Rober Frost's poem. You should probably change the title, to avoid accusations of plagiarism.

Here's a good tip: When you're using Photoshop, and you want the edited photo to come out looking unedited, just ask yourself whether the colors you're using can be found ...

Hey Fictionfanatic! I like the idea of this very much! For most of the dead , it doesn't matter , since you end up with the people you loved who ...

Hi RosieBaker! Welcome to the Young Writers' Society. I hope you'll get some good reviews here, as well as do a bit of reviewing, yourself. The Neck Well, what Roon ...

Hi Kitrosemon13! What Shepherd said! Two little corrections: :idea: You don't need a space before your question marks. :idea: Your second line should be, "I look formard to a fight." ...

Hi Kr1117! I love the detail in the second photo, and how all of the branches intertwine so well. In the first and third photos, you show excellent shading! Maybe ...

Hi Persephoneia! Excellent poem you have here! First thing: enjambment. I'm not saying it's bad, it's just that I don't get it. I mean, what is the reason for your ...

Oh, my, Blackbird12, I think this is the best short story I have ever read on YWS. It is so tenderly cold; the descriptions are so brutally lush. Oh, my. ...