Abigail_W.

Hi EishaM! I don't have that great an aptitude when it comes to lyrics, but I'll give it a try ... I can't really comment on the meter, because I ...

Hi phantom of the potter! Well these are just amazing! Stump Well, that is just one phenomenal stump! I love the color quality of the greens and browns; they make ...

That was so cute, WritingWords! It is so funny the things little kids will come up with. Sometimes, they think of really good story premises. I honestly think you should ...

Hi Jasmine Hart! I am usually sort of intimidated when it comes to reviewing the green guys' work, but I guess I'll give it a go. Whoa, there was a ...

Hi Persephoneia! I really like this poem. I like it quite a bit. ;) I wish I knew what you think I know this sounds a bit wonky, but this ...

Hi Allmixedup! Part one of this play proved to be fileld with interesting concepts, though I have a few improvements that you could make. :arrow: Italics are a very important ...

Of course I know who Nelson Mandela is! I like the cool background, and you used excellent detail. I agree with Shepherd; I'd like to see this bigger and know ...

Oh, you should have! Especially if it was against other people your age!

Hi Bluebird24! First things first, I love your avatar! The Smurfs rule! Now, onto the poem ... I really have just one criticism. Adjectives, adjectives, adjectives. They're everywhere, and they ...

Um, what Baywolf25 said! He just about summed it up. I just two little corrections. I'm not that five year old daughter anymore. Whether you change this or not is ...

For a seven-year-old's work, this is phenomenal! There is just one mistake, which I am sure is a typo; in the first line, you wrote "lonel" instead of "lonely." Did ...

Hi KAH! I like the flowers you took the photos of, but I am sort of distracted by the backgrounds. In the second and third photos, I can't help but ...

Hi ScarlettFire! I love this poem! Moonlight flittered down Do you mean "fluttered," perhaps? Or maybe "flitted"? "Flittered" isn't a word -- but then again, in poetry, you can feel ...

Hi Virsanity! I have to agree with Iceprincess here; you are trying too hard to rhyme. Young as we are, older we journey so far. This line really didn't make ...

Ooh, this is awesome! I especially like the details of the sword handle (yes, I know tons of people already said that). I love how you make the sword look ...