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Hi Iceprincess! I love the idea of this poem! Brushing off some dust She cannot comprehend why Carousel died "Carousel died" is only four syllables. Raindrops start to fall Brushing ...

Hi Scien! Welcome to the Young Writers' Society! I must say, this is fabulous! Where did you get the inspiration to write this? I see just one (maybe two) mistake(s). ...

Hi Jon! I'll go through and fix spelling mistakes, etc. in red ... In the course of human souls - we shine effluvistically bright by the way the light shines ...

I'm sure most of us have read Elinor Brynn's article on how to resize your photography. She says to make register to Photobucket if you don't already have an account. ...

I love the dirty little kid's shoe. But owie! My eyes! You have had sixty views, but only two (now three) comments; the photos are too big! Please resize them, ...

Hi Junaid! If you are not very fluent in English, the Young Writers' Society is an excellent place to begin! Try your best and you will do just fine! :D

Hi Fiction903! My, these are beautiful photographs! May I ask what kind of camera you used? The photos all seem sort of dark and hazy, as Kyllorac said. Perhaps you ...

Hi Cyndaday95. As everyone else has said, capitalization is a must. I like the concept of this poem. I like everything about this poem. I just have one nitpick: to ...

Hi StoryWeaver13! I am certain this was not your first attempt at haiku. It simply can't be. You must secretly be sneaking haikus all around your house, stuffing little scraps ...

Hi Demoness! I hate to say it, but I find this poem to be rather bland. My heart: isn't the topic a bit overused? This seems like something you would ...

Hi Scutter11! I agree with Snoink, and I haven't read the rest of the play either. I know in screenplay this doesn't matter much, but it might if you submit ...

Hi TheReader22! I'd have to say I like picture #2 better, mainly because the houses are lighter and easier to see. I understand your dilemma with the houses; my biggest ...

Hi there VitaminCakes! I could totally see these photos being used on a calendar or as a desktop background. You clearly exhibit excellent photography skills. For future reference, though, I ...

Hi Drawers! This is a beautiful poem, though I have one overall question. Is this poem meant to be a personification of the abstract concept of loneliness, or is it ...

Hi ASingleDarkRose! First, I'll go through and edit some things ... Faceless people stare at me, my fear showing plain as can be. I think, I hope, I may be ...