Abigail_W.

I must admit, I'm quite scared. So, you know, I'm not really gonna pick at this all that much, since, you know, I'm kinda scared. But, it's Oscar the Grouch. ...

Hiya! I'm gonna have to aggre with Mizzle on this one. The punctuation was kind of off. However, this poem is just so cute! "The past that binds me/The lust ...

Hiya Meggwriting, and, as I see you're new, welcome to the Young Writers' Society! I like this, though it could be a bit redundant. I think I'll just go through ...

Hiya Blackbird12! I quite like this ... they come out to play at night. the yellow-eyed Monsters, they hide in my closet as my mind drifts to a plastic world ...

That building on Up looks mighty familliar. What is it? It's just some random building in Manhattan. I'm telling you, there are thousands like it. It just looked cool at ...

I am a huge fan of poetry, but I don't really know what you mean when you say only avid poets will understand this. I think if anyone digs deep ...

I finally got around to resizing the pictures, and the attachments are posted up there! ^^

Hiya Sierra! I see you are new, so welcome to the Young Writers' Society! I think I will just go through and edit some things in red and nitpick along ...

I can't think of a thing to correct that sargsauce hasn't already. However, I am confused with the overall purpose of the "poem." A poem criticising poetry? Isn't this a ...

I've posted this here before, but have edited it and revised it and done so again. Opinions? Ever-glowing windows housing haggard, drunken men Women dance in corridors and children jump ...

Hiya! Great poem you have here. Eternal life is such a good lie, But in the end, we all must die. The life that is lived, has no better meaning, ...

Hiya, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! The content of this poem is excellent, so I will just go through and edit some things in red ... Your eyes, ...

The first photo was by far my favorite. I absolutely loved how natural and beatiful it was. I also like the black and white here. Did you take these photos ...

I'd appreciate it if you reviewed my work! Most of these were taken on a flim Canon Rebel 2000. Thanks!

This is a very pretty poem, as I have noticed all of your poems are! I think I'm just going to pick at this a little bit, so bear with ...