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Re: I Am No One
Hey mikepyro! It's great to be able to read something and not have to worry about correcting grammar and spelling, and to top it of, you have an excellent plot ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Innocence Bane
Wow, it's obvious you're a gifted poet. The only nitpick I have is that the apostrophe should be after the word "lovers" in the first stanza because you're talking about ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Non-shy Deer
Muy bien! I love these photos in color. Excellent!
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Random
Hi ChocolateMoonLight! It's great you had a camera with you at this moment, and I really like the colors in these photos. You can't really go wrong with sunset pictures! ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: I made a deal with the Devil
Hey retrodisco! First off, I'd like to say that I absolutely love this poem. Your imagery here is beyond fantastic. The only corrections I could make would be to keep ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Of Songs and Roads
Wow. This is absolutely fantastic! That's all I can say. My one correction would be that you forgot the "t" one of the times you wrote the word "won't". That's ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Non-shy Deer
Hey Sassykat! You're so lucky you got close enough to a deer to take photos of it. Whenever a deer roams around my neighborhood, I grab my camera and it ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Cherry Blossoms and a Faucet
Hey VitaminCakes! You obviously have a great eye, and it's great that you remembered to include more in your photos than just special effects. I like how, in the second ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: (help me come up with a title)
Hi jujubean! I like the feel of this story, but will there be more? I'd like to see more, and I'd like to know more about this roommate. Your plot ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Maybe, I'm a Pencil
Hi CrimsonArrow! I like your poem and I like the metaphors. My only problem is that you use way too many commas. Try reading the poem out loud, pausing where ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Miscellaneous Art
Here a couple of random pieces of art I made ... tumblr_ll0dxaqHeI1qc00r1o1_1280.jpg tumblr_lacn8qyqXB1qc00r1o1_1280.jpg
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: New Photography :)
Hey there! I think all photographers go through this over-editing phase, and it's sort of an important phase to go through because once you outgrow it, you'll be an editing ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: A brief history of boys I fancied as a teenager
Hey Chanson! First off, I have to say that I really like this. I've written similar lists, but certainly not as detailed or as interesting. Also, I'm only 14, so ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: The Red Brick Wall
Hi there! I really like the message of this piece, and I think you chose a great symbol, but it might need a little work. The dried up cement that ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: what is.....
Hi there! I see you're new to YWS; welcome! I'm sure you'll get some good reviews here, and hopefully you'll do a bit of reviewing yourself. Now, onto the review: ...
Jan 13, 2011
