Abigail_W.

Fun fun fun! I love this poem! Hum hum hum! Drum drum drum! It makes me want to write in rhymes! The flow is excellent. It is so carefree. Whoop ...

I like this! It's short, funny, and to the point. I like the rhyme scheme. It almost has some of the qualities of a limerick. I've highlighted the things I ...

Hiya bluebird24. First of all, welcome to the wonderful land of the Young Writers' Society. I hope my critique isn't too hard on you -- in fact, you can totally ...

I really appreciate the comments, everyone! I am going to work on it more right now ...

I often find that, in my eager attempts to be descriptive, my wording becomes very heavy. Criticism is smiled upon! ~~~~~~~~~~~ What a state of paranoia Betsy could throw herself ...

Hi there! I love the aim of this poem, as I am very much of an environmentalist. However, I see a few improvements that could be made ... The tears, ...

I really appreciate the input; this is just a poem in the works. By the way, I absolutely love your icon -- Jimi Hendrix is the best rockstar of all ...

Thanks for the comments!

This poem has evident charm, and the only corrections I'll make are technical ones. I answer to him. And with little fingers he dabs His brush , in the paint. ...

I wrote this completely on a whim -- it took me no more than fifteen minutes -- so don't expect it to be marvelous. Red latex hides behind spindly branches ...

Thanks for all the great comments! Thanks for the advice, Jasmine Hart, and I'll consider "scars caused by a good deed," but I'd prefer to keep "such," because, if you ...

I know why nobody has responded to this post yet -- they are speechless! This is extraordinary! What can I say? I have just one bit of criticism, and that ...

Brassy bugle, Harmonious hymn, Such a moan you mouth like a wounded warrior or a gambling gust outside a tiny house Sacred sounds Vivid vibrations, Such a note you knead ...

Very nice work! Since this is only two paragraphs, I'm just going to pick at the little things. You forget their eye color, the way they walked, or the sound ...

You are a very talented photographer! I think my favorite picture is #2. It was brilliant of you to note the blending colors of the sky, the snow, and the ...