Abigail_W.

I haven't been here in a while.

I like this, but it might be helpful if I knew what the prompt for the contest was. Since I really can't judge the writing itself without knowing exactly what ...

This isn't my first draft, but I have yet to finish editing. My mother insisted that I attend public ice skating with Ashley every Friday night since I was old ...

You exhibit great talent in online graphic design, Prism! The sunspots add a realistic touch to the image, making it almost as though you were viewing it through a window ...

This is a beautiful and expressive poem, and I am eager to read more of your work. Drums beat colors that float to bleakness. Watch the cloud rumble through the ...

Thanks for posting this topic, Nate! I noticed some of those ads, and I can usually tell when an ad looks fishy . . .

I press my forehead and nose on the window. It's cold even though it's in the dead of summer on Cape Cod. My mother and I are driving back to ...

Ooh, ooh, can I be Tanya? Or at least apply? If so, here is my application: Name: Tanya Age: 476, going on 477 Gender: Female Personality: Appearance: Okay, I'm not ...

I believe that the reason nobody commented on this before was because you left us completely and utterly speechless. Enough said.

I absolutely love this poem. It's just so true! However, I have a few suggestions. :arrow: Perhaps you could edit the meter a bit; take out some syllables, replace some ...

Hi Adameagle! I like this piece, although it doesn't really feel like poetry to me. The informal attitude makes it seem more like lyrics to a rap song or something, ...

Might I say that this left me speechless? This essence of this poem was just perfect. My only advice can be a quick correction of spelling, and a suggestion as ...

Criticism is smiled upon, as I have edited this but once. : D The light drizzle one summer afternoon merely aggravated the feelings of a middle-aged woman, driving home in ...

Hello, Bridget, and welcome to the Young Writers' Society! If you have writers' block, this is the perfect place to come. You can read and write alike, along with reviewing ...

The Original: Hans Christian Anderson's The Little Match Girl from the father's point of view. I acknowledge the fact that I am cruel, but you must sympathize with me. I ...