Abigail_W.

This is such a poignant poem! It is very bittersweet and sad. On a breezy autumn day A girl went out to play Her name was Delilah McLear Prettiest girl ...

Do we still have the point system?

The premise of this poem is excellent, I think that vote should be unanimous. I just didn't really understand the structure of this poem. Was it supposed to be a ...

This is a very nice poem, and you did an excellent job keeping the rhyme and the meter flowing easily. However, may I suggest you omit the use of elipses ...

I am surprised you wrote this when in a state of writers' block, because the imagery is spectacular. I though the story was about a robot. It feels like something ...

This is a beautiful poem, stuffed with imagery and metaphors I would never have thought of. When deciding whether an idea is original or not, I ask myself, "Would anybody ...

May I suggest that you keep away, in fairy-tale-like pieces, from the "Once upon a time, long, long ago, there lived king named . . ." beginnings? I feel that ...

Hello Tedus! Nice to meet you, and welcome to the Young Writers' Society community. Before you begin exploring this little writing world, there are a few rules you need to ...

When I tell you this is a Victorian novel, I know what you will think: ugh. But this is more than just a long, boring Victorian novel. This is a ...

Such a pretty little poem this is, and -- oh! -- how true. Thank you for writing a love poem that is original, and does not tell the same old ...

Do you think I ought to submit this to a publication website I know?

Hello! I think that this piece is excellent, and really makes one think. ZaddieCaso pretty much covered and punctuation or spelling errors I would have mentioned, but I have a ...

That is beautiful! I love the way you first painted the background, then the subject, then spattered on those drips of paint. My only concern is the paper you used. ...

Hey Heyo! (Please excuse my sorry jokes.) Welcome to the Young Writers' Society, and have a great time! I think most of the rules have been specified before in this ...

This is a very pretty poem, although -- dare I say? -- I am beginning to be quite bored with the subject. Yes, yes, we know you love is leaving ...