Abigail_W.

I enjoyed the overall ease and flow of this song. I am glad you chose to post this as lyrics instead of as a poem, because one can see where ...

All I can say is, holy cow. That was amazing. I thought it was a photograph for a second there.

Oh, he's so cute! Jessie, I didn't know you were into photography. Great job!

Hi Jessie! I like the black and white flare of this photo. My only concern is that the palm tree is sort of, you know, floppy? The shrubbery around it ...

Hello! I figure I'm not going to start off criticising, so I have to say: the imagery in this poem is outstanding. My real concern in the first "stanza" (if ...

Oh my, this is so true! First things first: this is one of the best poems lacking rhyme that I've ever read. I think this is because you gave the ...

Umm . . . what Mira said! But yes, we are completely anti-chat speak. All you need is a capitalization of those proper nouns and the first letter of each ...

First things first; you did a very nice job with the rhyme scheme. The meter was very good, so, in accordance, the flow was, too. My only concern is that, ...

Oh, my, this is marvelous! When reading poetry, I always try to think to myself, "Now, would any other person in the world think to formulate these exact words in ...

Oh my! Your similies are simply astounding. I couldn't think of one improvement. Enough said.

This is a very sweet poem, filled with nostalgia of days long past. It is a very pretty little poem, if I do say so myself. The only problem I ...

I apologize for this post, but my computer was taking it's sweet time to load, so I hit the "Submit" button twice. I edited out my comment on this one, ...

I believe this topic is unanimously agreed upon. Nobody wants to hear about the lethargic, passive attitude of the poet. Rather, they would like to hear what triggered him not ...

I believe this topic is unanimously agreed upon. Nobody want to hear about the lethargic, passive attitude of the poet. Rather, they would like to hear what triggered him not ...

I think I've been writing ever since I could write! In preschool, maybe, I wrote these cute little stories about dogs that fell in love and what my dad and ...