Abigail_W.

Hi Lilliana! I think the best way for you to start figuring out what you want to write is to explore the forums, and read some of other peoples' work. ...

Hey Blak! I'm Abigail. I think we all pretty much agree that "no chat speak" is the number one rule here. We're here to write, not to try to be ...

Wow . . . creepily cool.

This is a very impressive cartoon! My only recommendation would be that the black of her upper coat could be a bit lighter, because, at first, I couldn't distinguish that ...

I have one question about fanfiction. When a person is attempting to publish fanfiction, does he/she need permission from the producer of the book, movie, or show the idea is ...

Nothing To Wish For My only suggestion would be that, in the following statement, the use of the word "up" in the second line is unnecessary, as you have already ...

This poem, as with the other one of yours I commented on, is completely pleasing to me. My one suggestion would be to take out the parentheses. To me, they ...

This poem is absolutely wonderful and needs, in my eyes, no help. I love your use of color to describe things that can't actually be visualized, such as prayers. Also, ...

I agree completely with Juniper, so I'm here just to correct some grammatical and spelling mistakes. Laughing to you Ls like crying to others Like pulling out my hair at ...

This is a very sweet poem that I'm sure we can all sympathize with. I must say, though, that the topic is a bit overused, and some of the phrases ...

First things first: capitalization and spelling. Put spell-check on, capitalize your "I"s, and then the story will be fine.

Yes, Tusker, it was a double-rainbow. The premise of this story is that people in psychology say when a sight, like an aurora borealis or a rainbow, is presented to ...

Mind you, the alliteration in the topic description was completely unintended. ~~~~~~~~~~ Workers sigh upon the bills and rub their eyes in anguish Clorox-scented housewives work to toil over dishes ...

Oh, bluedragon, you're absolutely right about "massaging." Thanks for pointing that out, and, yes, I know the difference; it was just a typo. I thought that the boy was preoccupied ...

The idea of this poem is very nice, and I would never think to portray the results of smoking in such a way. In spite of it's overall glorious review, ...