Abigail_W.

Hi there Angelheart! First, I can't even describe how strong you are to go through and write this. The imagery was very vivid, and I definitely got a feel for ...

Welcome! I'm sure you'll do wonderfully here in the magical land of the Young Writers Society. I'd say the most important thing to remember is not to ... 7¥p3 £¥|{3 ...

Hi there! Well, this is one interesting poem, I'll grant you that. I have the feeling that it could turn into something fabulous, but it might need a little work. ...

Hey there! I'll start off by going through and editing some things in red. You can only put down a class for so long until they rise up from ben ...

I commend you for sketching such a beautiful portrait in pen! For some reason, it's impossible for me to use pens. I don't know why. I just have to use ...

My first attempt at taking photo's with a Christmas theme Why do I find this so incredibly hard to believe? This is a beautiful photo! I like the fact that ...

I say we all commend this advice by reviewing it! Okay, maybe not ...

This sounds great! Is considered "published"?

Hey there! How are you? I like this poem very much, but I think you may have to work on the enjambment a little bit. I'll go through and edit ...

Wow, you sure are lucky to live in a place where you could've taken this photo! We sure don't get sunrises like that where I come from. I really like ...

Hi again, Persephoneia! I'm here to review. Down the Tram Line I tend to take quite a few symmetrical pictures similar to this, as well. I really like how perfectly ...

Hi Kyladoot! Welcome to YWS! The first thing I have to ask you about this poem is: what was your purpose? Usually, when I'm writing poetry or a short story, ...

Hi Mayendejoe! Welcome to the Young Writers' Society! I'm afraid I have to agree with Mizzle; this isn't exactly a poem. I'm not sure if YWS is the right place ...

Hi BadNarrator! Welcome to YWS! Okay, I'm quite certain that the biggest problem in this piece is the punctuation and overall set-up. It is very hard to tell where on ...

These were taken on a film Canon Rebel 2000. It's easier to post the links, but if you're having trouble viewing them, I can post them as attachments. Thanks! ^I ...