Abigail_W.

Hey there! I think everyone else just about covered it, but I see one more mistake: the first line is in the present tense, while the rest of the poem ...

Hi Durriedog! Your rhyme scheme is absolutely fabulous! It wasn't too predictable or forced and just seemed to roll off the tongue. Good work! This is written from the point ...

Thanks! I'm not the greatest at spelling :) No prob. :D Those of us who are not the greatest at spelling were lucky to have been born in the modern ...

Hi Nike! How's it going? I think I'll start by going through and editing/revising some things in red, not to mention a few comments on the side. My heart couldn't ...

Hi Snickerdooly! I think Snoink mostly covered it, so I'm just going to make a quick list of words you need to correct ... - collects - woman's - distrupts ...

Hi VitaminCake! Hmm, let's see. The splash of color in the first picture can be pretty distracting, and I think we all agree on that point. As Sillyducky recommended, I ...

Hi Mimimac! The title drew me in from the first ... My hopes are very simple, A dream rolled into one. Yet fears are more the reality, My dread of ...

Hi BlueAfrica! Okay, honestly, this is confusing, but it's great once you sit down and think about it. I mean, the message is so unique and beautiful, and the whole, ...

Hi KatTrain! I like this, and I definitely think it's cute. I just wrote you this whole long elaborate review, but in my lack of computer sense I managed to ...

Hi Mystical Blood! These are beautiful! I might consider re-resizing them, though, because I had to change the zoom level of my browser to 50% to view them properly. If ...

Hi Berlynn Rae! This is a nice poem you have here, and some outstanding imagery, but it definitely needs some work. Let's start from the top. "Nothing could be more ...

Woah! For having not-drawing-for-too-long-itus, this is fantastic! I see just one odd little mistake that may very well only occur to me; her feet look very big! I know what ...

Hi Kyllorac! I like this poem and I love the metaphor. I really think the only thing you have to work on is the enjambment. I almost feel as though ...

Hiya Tenyo! Well, I think we've unanimously decided that this is extremely creative and cute. Oh, boy, is it cute! However, I think it's lacking something. I'll use the first ...

Hi Theotherone! I must say, these are absolutely beautiful, though I might make just one little tiny recommendation; perhaps you could make the eye in the third drawing a bit ...