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Re: My Country =D
These are gorgeous, Sol! They're a bit blurry, but for not knowling a bit about photography, they're excellent! You're so lucky to live in such a beautiful country is Puerto ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Pixel Art
Hmm, I like this! Wait, no, I *like* this. ;) Okay, on with the review. This definitely isn't my favorite thing that you've drawn, but I really do appreciate it. ...
Sep 24, 2010 -
Re: She will never know.
Hi Hayley! My biggest question about this poem is, what's it about? You are stating this poem to someone else. Did the "you" in this poem die? Who is "she"? ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: B&W Chess pieces
Hi Chryssa! I really like this ... I like it quite a bit! Chess pieces have such a medieval mystique to them, making them fabulous photography subjects. The only thing ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Which Photo?
Hi Hibiscus! I'm gonna have to go with the first photograph. I couldn't exactly tell what the blue/red thing was until I read the description; I think it may have ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Charlie
Hi Fictionfanatic! You know the drill; I'll go through and edit some things, first. I didn't mean for anyone to get hurt. E s pecially not him. But no one ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Missing
Hey Kitrosemon13! I'll start with the nitpicks, then get to the general aspect of the poem ... Alone in a world so unforgiving, losing all that's left of my humanity. ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] The Waiting Room - Poem [Edited]
Ay, ay, ay. I just wrote a whole long, intricate, helpful review, only to find that Internet Explorer couldn't display the webpage. I hate it when that happens. So, I ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] The Waiting Room - Poem [Edited]
Hi Hibiscus! Are you kidding? Of course it's good! You can't keep thinking so negatively! Now, I'm going to edit this so you can be confident of your potential chance ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: February 23
Hi SilentRain. Hmm, February where I am is cold, snowy, and horrible. o_O But anyway. On with the review. Tranquil days, lazy days, under the sun that kisses the Earth. ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] Matthew and Ali
Hi again, I think I'll just go through and edit the grammatical things ... I really couldn't afford to miss a day of work though, you need to understand that. ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] Matthew and Ali (Poem)
Hi Elinor Brynn! I know this is for the contest, so I'll take the opportunity to be rather frank: I felt no emotion. I once took a creative writing class, ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] I'm A Penguin
Hi Ultraviolet! Since you're submitting this for the September contest, I'll just correct the technical, poetic stuff. I mean, if I told you to change something in the plot of ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: Black and White Still Life
Oh no, Inkwell! The attachment went away! Seriously, it says the attached file doesn't exist anymore. I'd love to review it when (or if) you get it back -- just ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Inaudible
Hi Grassnony63! Welcome to YWS; I hope you'll get some good reviews here, a well as writing a few reviews, yourself. :wink: I didn’t know how to feel or even ...
Sep 14, 2010
