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Heybeccahey! I love how I can greet you just by stating your user-name. :D I really like the flow of this poem. There were no awkward pauses, and this shows ...

My friend Jessie (Jessie2009)

Hi Blossom! I hope you don't mind if I change the color back to black for now, because I like to highlight errors in red. :clap: Testing and luring my ...

Hi Cubesj! Welcome to YWS! I hope you will get some great reviews here, as well as do a bit of reviewing, yourself. The voice was loud, it echoed in ...

Aww, this is so said! I hope it isn't true! Okay, now, on to the review! You were strong through the years, Teaching me proper manners, And at people’s birthdays, ...

Hi Prism! Wow, this is really fantastic, but I don't think Anakin has that big of a dimple in his cheeks. Did you copy this from a photo? It would ...

Ooh, much better! The eyes are beautiful! See how much more life that little glint of light gave them? You did a fantastic job with the shading. I noticed you ...

Hi Laurelin3! Welcome to the magical world of the Young Writers' Society. I love this poem! It flows smoothly and falls off the tongue, and you didn't seem restricted by ...

Hey Romance Otaku! I think Inkwell pretty much summed it up. I really like this poem, and I must admit that I look at homeroom that very way, sometimes. I ...

As for the colors, you can just as well use [color=red][/color] or [color=blue] or whatever color you choose, as opposed to [color=#FF0000][/color] or [color=#0000FF][/color]. Those big long numbers j

Hi Kat Jackson! I'll be reviewing your poem here today. First things first, you don't need the comma in the second stanza. Not only will it flow better, but it ...

Hi Channon! I love the concept of this poem, but the first thing I noticed about it is that you are restricted by your rhyme scheme. In fact, you are ...

Hi Matt! This is a very nice sketch, but the main problem I saw was the eyes. His pupils are a bit small, and lack that lifelike touch. I find ...

Hi Ryanke07! I loved this. There is something to be said for those times when the sky seems as crisp as the huckleberry pie she made for you when you ...

Hi AtticusGallows! If I haven't said this already, welcome to YWS. I won't go into great detail right now, as time isn't exactly on my side, but the main thing ...