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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The first of June

    Like CassandraInvisible said, the varying lengths in the stanzas seem very random and give off an unorganized impression. It's quite distracting to me, personally. However, I believe you have much ...

    May 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Why Now?

    I'm new here so I may not be as fit to criticize as others but would this be better suited under the Dramatic Poetry section? Also after gravestone, I believe ...

    May 8, 2008


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