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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Thorns & Roses [1.1]

    Hey Pink, Two times in one night, I must be feeling generous, kidding. You know, I comment more on your writings than anyone else's, their just so good, can't help ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Taboo [17]

    Hey Pink! As ever you have delivered with Taboo, I am thoroughly pleased with it, congrats. I really don't have an nitpicks, or grammar issues, but you hardly ever have ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Boys Next Door Chapter One

    Hey FictionFanatic, This was really really good, I totally enjoyed reading it! I can't wait to read more. I only found a few problems, One: when a new person talks ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Locke and Keye

    Hey guys, this is just something that I'm palying with. I put it in the fantasy forum because it does turn into a fantasy novel, but it's just a little ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: We Are Forever Lovers-Chapter One

    Hey Pota, This was pretty good, one of the nicest Twilight fanfictions I've read in awhile, I would give you a longer critque, but I can barely keep my eyes ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The List *More**

    Hey Nike, This is great so mysterious, I can't wait to read more. I am super curious about the list of course, but the strange people in this girl's house, ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Romanov chap 1.2

    Hey guys, this is part two of the first chapter of The Romanov, please please please comment, this is my most favorite piece that I have ever written and I ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Bad Girl, Good Liar

    Hey Wicked, This is a good start, I really enjoyed reading it. This is the first uhh...pole dancer...I've read on here and granted there are probably more, but I haven't ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Taboo [12]

    Hey Pink, Like always you deliver, I was so excited to read this chapter, although a little sad that it wasn't longer. I can't ever get enough of your writing, ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Tormented -Chapter One.

    This was really good, I enjoyed it so much! I can't wait until your post more, your character is nicely developed, but my advice, don't take that mary-sue test survey ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Kat Anderson's Survival Guide to Vampires Introduction

    This is great, I love the idea of vamps being the official baddies, and not the other way around. This kinda reminds me of that movie Zombieland, which by the ...

    Oct 7, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Romanov revised

    Thank you so much, this is the best post I have ever gotten on this piece of work, I so appreciate it, you don't know how much, haha, because I ...

    Oct 7, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Romanov revised

    So I had originally posted this in the romance section thinking that later on I would eventually add some romance to this, but for now its mostly action here it ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Invisibles. Prologue (Revised)

    This is a complete mystery, and I love it. I want to know everything about this story, everything, the prologue wasn't enough, so I guess I'll have to read the ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Vampires Story: A New Begining Chp.1

    Hey Cassie, my name is Addawen and I'll be reviewing you today! First off you caught my attention right off the bat, mostly because I'm a sucker for vampire tales. ...

    Oct 6, 2010


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes