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Re: Taboo [12]
Hey Pink, Like always you deliver, I was so excited to read this chapter, although a little sad that it wasn't longer. I can't ever get enough of your writing, ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Tormented -Chapter One.
This was really good, I enjoyed it so much! I can't wait until your post more, your character is nicely developed, but my advice, don't take that mary-sue test survey ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Kat Anderson's Survival Guide to Vampires Introduction
This is great, I love the idea of vamps being the official baddies, and not the other way around. This kinda reminds me of that movie Zombieland, which by the ...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: Invisibles. Prologue (Revised)
This is a complete mystery, and I love it. I want to know everything about this story, everything, the prologue wasn't enough, so I guess I'll have to read the ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: The Vampires Story: A New Begining Chp.1
Hey Cassie, my name is Addawen and I'll be reviewing you today! First off you caught my attention right off the bat, mostly because I'm a sucker for vampire tales. ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: The Neighbor-Intro
Hey there Deliliah, Haha, makes me think of that song by the Plain White T's. Let's get down to business shall we? Ok, now I'm going to be frank, your ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: -deleted-
Hey Pink, Once again, your writing has perplexed me in the best way possible. You are an amazing writer young lady, superb! But, I have to be honest, otherwise what ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [11]
I loved it! Please tell me that you continuing on with Liliah and Luke? Please! Its so beautiful, and I can't wait to read more, although I did wonder what ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [10]
Hey Pink, Like always you have delivered, I have read every single chapter\part and I love it, you are beautifully talented, please don't ever quit. Like I said, I liked ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Mike Fyler
ok, I'm sorry I don't want to be mean, because I would never want anyone to bash my writing, and I promise I will not do that. But this is ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: Bonded By Blood A True Blood FanFic
This is good, I want more! I love love love!! True Blood!! Eric is my favorite, Godric is pretty nice too, wish they had him in more episodes. Oh well, ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: Fairytale: A love story... (chapter Two)
Whoa whoa, proposing already? I know he's confused since he's from another world, but proposing is a little quick, and her reaction should be something like wanting to send him ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Blue Eyes Don't Lie (2) (edited)
OK first thing, I got this trait from my mom, it's called GuessingWhatsGoingTOHappenNextItis It's a terrible disease, but what I'm tryin to say is, I kinda figured out that the ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Blue Eyes Don't Lie (edited)
Awww, so cute! I love it! Totally what I'm looking for in a romance. They meet, there's sparks, words are shared and then departure, each one thinking of the other. ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Unknown Incidence (1)
I would have to agree with everyone else, this has great potential, but if this is the first chapter its bland, I'm sorry but it is. Practically everyone has told ...
May 20, 2010
