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Re: The Spirit Vampire - Chapter Three
It's good, but all three chapters are so short, and in all reality I don't know anything really about Ally. Why does she dislike everyone around her? Your writing is ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 5 (new!)
Oh my word, this is adorable!! My favorite chapter to date, I love the sparks that fly between them, it's perfect! And Jean, Ooo, he's so bad, but in a ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Drained {Chapter One}
I love it, I don't know why everyone else is saying such negative things, vampire stories are the IT thing now, even I myself have stuck my finger in that ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: Mistress:Prologue (rated 18+ explicit scenes)
Wow, this is really good! It kinda reminds me of this one Barbara Cartland book, which is a good thing because she is an excellent writer. Though I do have ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 2
I love this! Seriously, I love the idea of the prince being a bad ass, pardon my French, it's a cute idea. Now, it looks like everyone has given you ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Taste Of My Enemy. Chapter Two.
I like it! The first paragraph in italics, is rough and hard in a good way. I like how it's right in your face with the romance part. Now, I ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Jessie's Kiss
Wow, this was sad, it was good but so sad. Ha, that's all I can say really, that it was good but it was sad, sad as in what happened ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: Kitchen Wars
Hey Pink! Well you always deliver, and for that I am thankful. I love the idea of a love interest in the kitchen, I love cooking myself. I hate to ...
Mar 4, 2010 -
Re: The Finish Line
This is too cute! It was so simple, but simple is sometimes better, no crazy plots or dialoge, it was just satisfying. I loved the new shoes and diamond ring ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Thorns & Roses [7]
I love it, so what if the kiss was a lil cliche! It was sweet and innocent, I really hope Nick doesn't think of Vicks as a replacement for his ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Werewolves/vampire capter 4
Now it's getting good, not that the first three chapters weren't good, they were just fine. But now we're getting into the vampires, which is my favorite of all time, ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Thorns & Roses [5]
Pink, you always deliver, I love reading everything you do, Thorns & Roses, Keepers. I just love it all!! Bravo! I can't wait for the next thorns and roses, I ...
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: A modern romance?
Wow, this is pretty interesting, but in a good way. And please don't be offended when I say this, but it was sick in a good way, really sick. Just ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: Angels And Vampires-Part 4
This is very interesting, but i like it. At first, I was a little, unsure. But it's grown on me, and I like it. But I totally knew that she ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: The Vampire's Story Chp.6
Ok, like whoa and no, just whoa and no. I'm going to be harsh, and I really don't like being mean but...common! What the heck, what was the entire 5 ...
Nov 12, 2009
