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Thanks for taking time to read and review. I will look into your points.

Thanks for the detailed review!

Thanks for taking time to read and review. Your points will improve my work.

Sweet! I'm currently working with a small team to make book 1 into a manga so hopefully by the time you've reviewed it, your free copy will be ready :D

Thanks a lot! Your review will definitely improve my work.

well technically it means fooled or tricked but I used it to mean frightened (like a good kinda fright though) :D

More like "see you later". We'll talk soon for sure.

Heh. Not too short now, is it?

:D And I appreciate your appreciation of my appreciation.

thanks for the review :) Yes, I use "blasted" way too much. I just have become tired of seeing "said" and "shouted", and now I have oevrdone my new favorite ...

Ah, thanks for reading and reviewing. If your read the previous chapters then Viknor's flashback here won't be confusing at all. I can imagine how confusing and chaotic my chapters ...

Ah, I think I know what you're getting at. Thanks for the review!

Thanks for your kind review!

Thanks for reviewing another chapters. I look forward to reading more reviews from you when you get back from vacation! Enjoy your vacation to the fullest.

Thanks for another incredible reviews! I will read these reviews yet another time when doing a mass editing over all the chapters. You're really one of the best reviewers I've ...