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AdmiralTyler

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Addiction

    Thanks for the review! I tried fixing the first two stanzas but it still isn't working for me. I also fixed the capitalization at the beginning. Thanks for pointing that ...

    Oct 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Addiction

    Just a another note, each stanza is four lines so right after the line "How I'm killing you" is a new stanza because something happened and it's not spacing between ...

    Oct 28, 2013


People say I love you all the time - when they say, ‘take an umbrella, it’s raining,’ or ‘hurry back,’ or even ‘watch out, you’ll break your neck.’ There are hundreds of ways of wording it - you just have to listen for it, my dear.
— John Patrick, The Curious Savage