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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Outside Alone - Foris Solum

    Most acrostic poems are creative and fun, while this one has some deeper meaning. It was refreshing. :) I really like what you wrote here, because I can quite identify ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Nike - acrostic poem

    I love that this is how you sum up yourself, in such a fun, creative way. :) Makes me want to write one myself. xD Wonderful job.

    May 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Love (Unfortunately)

    I don't have any critiques for this, because it's an acrostic, which I really don't know how to review, other than to say that I love them. :) The 'I ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Advertisements

    This describes ads to a T. I love it. :) You mix in just enough truth and comedy into these poems. I love it. :)

    May 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Quiznos

    These poems are all very clever and adorable. :) I really love how comedic it is. Woooonderful job. I love how you sum up just random subjects in these small ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Sponge Bob

    Haha! This was humorous and adorable. :) I remembering writing these in, what, third grade. XD Looove it.

    May 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Double Bass

    This was written beautifully. I really don't have anything bad to say about it, the metaphors you used were great, your writing style was fabulous. Just wonderful job altogether. :)

    May 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Aftermath (Another poem my friend who died and I coauthored)

    I'm deeply sorry about both your friends. As for the poem, there is nothing bad I can find to say about this poem. It was filled with such emotion that ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: End of a Dream

    Hey there. :) I agree with the first reviewer- it was long and stretched out, and hard for me to continue reading. You'll get better at keeping the reader entertained ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Writing

    Describes the feeling of writing to a Tee! :D Wonderful job. :)

    May 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I hate you.

    I really enjoyed reading this. :) The other reviewers have told you any nitpicks that I have, so, yeah. :) What I really like about this poem was the persistence ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hmm... What could it possibly be? Oh yes, I'm new.

    Hi! :) My names Kinzee, it's really nice to meet you! Everyone on YWS is super nice and wonderful writers. They give excellent writing tips, and it really is a ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Alright, so I'm ne here....

    Hi! Welcome to YWS! It's really nice to meet you! :) On YWS, you can post your work, get awesome critique, as well as talk with other absomazing writers! :) ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: New and excited!!!

    Hi! Welcome to YWS. Its a wonderful place to post your writing and get excellent tips from other awesome writers! :D What kind of stories or poems do you write? ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: HI

    Hi, Jovie! :) I'm Kinzee, it's nice to meet you. :) What kind of stories or poems do you write? I write more fiction novels than poems or short stories. ...

    May 11, 2011


That's how we should measure our lives. Not in distance traveled, or time passed, or worlds conquered, but in moments... and the rush of joy—of grace—that exists within them.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)