Aedomir

Hiya! Aly mimicked Auntie Clair, “Just do what I say!” I think that dialogue shoild be itaclized. I really liked that chapter! Nice and quick, fast-paced and kept me interested. ...

Yay thanks Jared! It's sort of a YWS for those who like writing in the internet community. Us, being writers, can help them.

Not really an adverstisement, it's just that since ther are a lot of writers here, I wondered if you'd like to check out my site. It's in my sig, and ...

lol! I will post soon!

Hiya! StoweAway is great!

I got scared.

Best Story in Each Category --Action/Adventure Fiction Jared's Field Trip (3 parts, thi is part one):

Opiniions are always welcome, thanks. I might do that, my surname is really boring for a writer, or at least, one that has intentions of getting somewhere. lol.

Really? Withdrawn? I'm against war but at least he tried.

I think it's a good idea that he goes over there, it shows that us Brits aren't all upperclass snobs. He speaks like a normal person too, what do you ...

lol, OK fi you want to know... toffee! or chocolate's good enough...

I think I reviewed this in the od post with this up. Like I said, this is great and the storyline is very original. I think it is a great ...

Ye... The scond vid is great. As are the other two...

! Harry Potter! Thanks a lot! I am in the process of rewritng this chapter, but it will do for now. Thank you!`

Thanks! Don't worry, I like feedback more than anything, grammar I don't worry about too much.