Aislynn

Hello, RedRidingBoots! I'm loving how the constellations work as a main image! They are comforting and yet still connected to Simon, so they carry a lot of meaning without feeling ...

Hi, Tikaya! I'm here for the Checklist Challenge, so please excuse my lack of knowledge :') 1. What's your initial reaction to the chapter? My initial reaction is that this ...

Hi, JukeboxHeart! This is a nice prologue! There is a looming sense of danger that I can feel, which definitely gives it that "something huge happened before chapter one" vibe ...

Hello, Junebug! I thought I would drop by to review this chapter! c: I know I haven't read the previous chapters, but I can definitely infer what's happening! My first ...

Hi, 4revgreen! I am reviewing this for the Checklist Challenge

Hey, ADNG! Before anything else, because this story deals so directly with suicidal thoughts, I just want to say please take care of yourself while writing material like this! If ...

Hello, afteraudrelorde! I had a hankering for an article and this one caught my eye! I think this is such a thoughtful and engaging essay, and I love how naturally ...

Hi there, xxxadklll! I'm going to be reviewing for you today with the YWS Critique Sandwich review template! You’re totally welcome to use it too! The basic idea is that ...

Hey, anothernicemess! I love your profile picture! First off, this is such an interesting concept! A crime museum run by cats already gives the story a really distinctive atmosphere. I ...

Hi, BrownMatter! I thought I’d drop by to leave a quick review on this poem! ^-^ First off, I really love the eerie atmosphere you create here. The narrator seeing ...

Hey, deermoka! I thought I’d drop by to leave a review on this story! =D "What?" Erik was brought back to reality after minutes of trying to make the right ...

Hi, georgeharrisons! Aislynn here with a review! =D It's been a while! Ooh, this is gorgeous! I really love how vivid this poem feels! I thought that the imagery was ...

Hi 4revgreen! I really love the dry, observant tone of this! You’ve captured the monotony of office life in such an engaging way. Every little detail about the cubicle, the ...

Hey, you two! I haven't reviewed in a few months! But this caught my eye! I haven't seen collaborative stories on here, only poetry. Refreshing! This is such an engaging ...

Hi century! Oh, I love the tone here! It’s thoughtful but not overly kitschy/sentimental, which is tough to balance when writing about memories like this! The pacing feels right for ...