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Hi notetoself! I really enjoyed this! Lux is such a fun character! She has a perfect balance of playfulness and responsibility. The way she navigates through the palace to gather ...

Hi suemai! The layers here are insane! The whole dynamic between the narrator and this other person feels like this endless push and pull. I really like how you framed ...

Hi sivasishbora! Aww, this is such a heartfelt story! I feel like I'm there on one of those summer visits to your grandma’s house, with all the fun and freedom! ...

Hi Seoyoung! Ooh wow, this is so deep! I love how you’re tying together science, love, and human experience like it's seamless. You’re writing about Adorno, Oppenheimer, and these massive ...

Hi candyhearts! This just pulled me in right away, and I had to give it a go! Okay, let's dive in. The whole narrative feels so visceral, and I love ...

Hi aaqas! I love the nostalgic and sweet feel of this piece! It really captures something fleeting or unforgettable that sticks with you! The way you describe the first-time experience ...

Hi LittleGirlGone! I haven't reviewed in a year, oh my goodness! I saw this in the Green Room and I figured I'd try my hand at reviewing again, so here ...

Hi cookiesandcream123! I haven't reviewed in a while, but I saw this in the Green Room! The title first caught my eye and the poem itself kept me around! I ...

Hi chi! I've been waiting for another poem of yours for a while now! I love when you write about relationships! I think this captures love very well, and almost ...

Hi HeartPermits! I haven't reviewed in a while, but this poem caught my eye! The imagery here is gorgeous! I love how contemplative it is without being too overbearing. Everything ...

Hi chi! Love the new username btw! I've been catching up on your NaPo thread! It's a pleasure to read your poetry! I love the gritty imagery here! Everything is ...

Hi chi! I always see your poetry when I'm looking to review something. It must be a sign! The first stanza is great! I think it says a lot about ...

Hi yamatri! This is such a lovely poem! I really enjoy the way you've set it up. I especially love the language choices! I think the whole "lost love" trope ...

Hi spatula! This is so conversational and yet so powerful at the same time. That's amazing :') Everything is very stream of consciousness and I think that's admirable. It feels ...

Hi Sunflowerdemon3712! This is neat! I'm a big fan of any magic :') The two main characters are really something. Cypress is aggressive and standoffish in the first chapter, but ...