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Re: Muditā
Hi angelbjim12! Ooh I really like this! I'm not usually a fan of romance, but this is sweet! There's a very vintage feeling to this that I enjoy! It feels ...
Jan 21, 2023 -
Re: just one more game..
Hi unseasonedwriter! This is a really intriguing topic to write about! So I don't really play video games that often, but I know a lot of people that do. I've ...
Jan 20, 2023 -
Re: Rebecca and Sandy‘s conversation
Hi again vampricone! =D It's always nice to read your writing! I'm not familiar with the characters, but I can tell they have a very complicated relationship. I could figure ...
Jan 20, 2023 -
Re: My Goodbye Poem.
Hi LaneyLane! I love how raw this feels! The emotion is very strong. Addiction is such a complicated thing and I feel like this poem shows that. It's harder to ...
Jan 15, 2023 -
Re: Where You Are Going, Where You Have Been by Joyce Carol Oates Character Analysis
Hi nickoklasyoon! Lovely choice of story! It's a classic. You do a great job analyzing Connie's character! I think her personality is really a big part of the plot and ...
Jan 13, 2023 -
Re: grow
Hi rainforest! I like your username! =D I've been eyeing this poem for a few days now, so I figured I'd review it! I love how you describe things! The ...
Jan 10, 2023 -
Re: moving past the talking stage
Hi spatula! I haven't read much of your poetry, but this is really good! I think you have a very prominent voice, but it's hard to actually describe it. It ...
Dec 31, 2022 -
Re: She Listens to Love Songs Waiting For You
Hi averyismediocre! I love the title! It's very engaging! This poem is incredibly relatable, and I think that's why it captured my interest the way it did! The way you've ...
Dec 23, 2022 -
Re: What I Have Done In My Gap Year
Hi Em16! It's cool to see an essay! That's new! I think you did great describing the emotional side of things! Gap years are really interesting to hear about, and ...
Dec 18, 2022 -
Re: In the Dark 2/2
Hi again stygianmoon17! I am back for this review since I checked out the last part! Okay everything really got extreme this part! I see why you left the last ...
Dec 17, 2022 -
Re: In the Dark 1/2
Hi stygianmoon17! Ooh this is intriguing! I like it so far! I really like the premise here! It's not really stated what exactly is happening, but I think that works ...
Dec 17, 2022 -
Re: Warren Paranormal Investigators: The Curse of the Wendigo Island.
Hi LightningFletch! This is super cool! I'm not usually a paranormal fan, but I like this! You definitely planned this out nicely! I love the paranormal investigation, "ghost hunter" vibes ...
Dec 17, 2022 -
Re: Keep walking
Hi BhavyaMehta123! This is so short and sweet! I love the meaning behind it. I love the subject here! Time passing is usually scary, but this has such a nonchalant ...
Dec 16, 2022 -
Re: Angelic Demon
Hi vampricone! Ooh I really like the premise here! I see a lot of the angel and demon romance trope, but I don't think it's really that common. You definitely ...
Dec 16, 2022 -
Re: When Is A War Not A War?
Hi bnnina! Oh, this is absolutely heartbreaking. It's beautiful though. I didn't actually know about this until now, I'll admit! I don't think people talk much about camps like this ...
Dec 16, 2022
