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Re: Once, on a cold night
Hi LizzyDear! This is quite long, but I'll take a look at it! The dynamic between the characters is really interesting I think. I'm not a big romance fan, but ...
Dec 16, 2022 -
Re: Moons Kisses
Hi Fab1e! Cool username! I think the moon is such a good poetry topic. It's lovely! I love the personification of the moon here! I know that it's very common ...
Dec 16, 2022 -
Re: glitter at christmastime
Hi LadyBug! This is gorgeous. I love it so much! It's so short, but it gets the point across so well. The holiday feel to this really makes it hit ...
Dec 15, 2022 -
Re: second best - chapter one: a rocky start
Hi juliannarexroad! I'm usually not a romance fan, but this looks promising! I like the idea! Romance is tricky to write, especially if it is romance that has ended. I ...
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Re: The Stupendous and Amazing Laughing Jack Song!
Hi again vampricone! I like the idea behind this! Creepypastas are quite fun to look into! So lyrics! I am a bit of a songwriter myself. I think it's really ...
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Re: Your mind, the well of wealth
Hi akanbright! This has some really interesting material in it! I agree with a lot that is said! The mind is such a powerful thing! It's cool to see other ...
Dec 10, 2022 -
Re: the urn on the mantle and a shower of pink rose petals
Hi crescentmoonprodigy! I rarely see Stranger Things fanfiction! This is fun! This is a great take on the universe! The dynamics between Belle and the other characters is refreshing honestly! ...
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Re: what is, but not i?
Hi angxlari! This is so beautiful! It's short, but that adds to the directness. The language is clear and uncomplicated, which hits hard. In just three sentences, you have created ...
Dec 10, 2022 -
Re: The doll
Hi vampricone6783! I love dolls! I collect them actually! =D Getting into the story, I like the feel of this! It's more paranormal and I usually don't pick those stories ...
Dec 10, 2022 -
Re: Hugo, Little Steps
This is adorable! I love it! I wasn't expecting it to be about a dog at first, if I'm being honest! I like how it was more vague at first, ...
Dec 10, 2022
