Aiva

Ahh! I'm so happy. Thank you so much for critting my story!! Actually, this is going to be a full length novel (guess I should have said that earlier...), so ...

Augh!! My first story critique!! I'm so happy!! Yeah, see, I wasn't quite sure if it sounded more like a first chapter than a prologue...Thanks for clearing it up! The ...

I love this story!! But, just like everyone else said, the ending was a bit confusing, and maybe even a bit abrupt?? But that's what makes it so good, so ...

You've got an interesting take on it, I'll give you that... But, yeah, I see what you're saying...I think... :? Heh. Thanks for taking the time to read it!

Yeah, I completely get what your saying. My focus when it comes to poems and songs varies a LOT. I get off topic....Hehe. Yeah, I meant to put quotes around ...

The imagery!! Wow. It's stunning. I'm in love with it. It's hard to explain why... things that are obscure like what you presented in your poem makes it sort of ...

It's really interesting. I'm a newbie when it comes to poetry, but I like the different way you wrote it. It's new to me. But I like it. It's just ...

That was fabulous! It was witty and funny and enjoyable to read! You're a fantastic rhymer as well! Good work.