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AkuRashomon

I used corruption because I trusted you.

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Soldier's Remorse

    Hi, hello! This is Ina speaking. I am to give a comment/review for your poem that caught my eye in the green room. Anyways, let's get into it. I feel ...

    Jan 6, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: No one will know and No one will care

    Hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a comment/review. Anyways, let's get into it. I love how you use simple words that were put together to ...

    Jan 6, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: May’s story

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a quick comment/review. I really like it when you separate you story's parts into chapters. I love the ...

    Jan 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A poem I wrote about Life and Death

    Hi, hello! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a quick comment/review about your poem. I scrolled and scrolled in the green room and I didn't find anything ...

    Jan 5, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: portrait of a shapeshifter

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a little comment/review about this beautiful poem of yours. Anyways, let's get to it. I've never imagined shapeshifters ...

    Jan 5, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Behind the trees

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am just goning to drop a quick comment/review. This story is very interesting. I like how Samantha's past was like dark and ...

    Jan 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The story of Lisa, the burning fire girl

    Hi, hello. This is Ina speaking. I am going to give a comment/review. This is one of the first long stories I've read from you and it is pretty good ...

    Jan 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Dark Truth E.1

    Hi, hello. This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a comment/review. I'm not really interested with horror stories but this one is pretty good and has potential. I ...

    Jan 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Missing Puzzle Pieces and Synthetic Identity

    Hi, hello. This is Ina speaking. I am going give a quick comment/review. Wow, I love the sad boy/girl vibes the poem is giving. When I was younger than now, ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: moving past the talking stage

    Hello there. This is Ina. I'm gonna give a quick comment/review. I love how I can imagine a lot of stuff while reading throughout the poem. I feel like it's ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Confines Of Ghosts

    Hi, hello. This is Ina speaking. I like jow it could give off mysterious and strange vibes but still answers to the questions at the same time like what the ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Wonderland

    Hello, hi there. This is Ina speaking. Anysways let's get to the poem. Wow, what a nice starting. I liked how it made me feel really calm and it made ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: Eric is Dead

    Hi, hello! This is Ina speaking. I like how it can be a bit mysterious and dark. But also, sad because of her brother and maybe the other Eric whom ...

    Dec 26, 2022
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: raw

    Hello, hi! This is Ina speaking. I love how the story builds up and how the story tells stories from the past. I found the story interesting how it was ...

    Dec 26, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: A Letter to Death

    Hello @Horisun! This is Ina speaking. I'm not good with words but here's a review. This poem gives me chills, and I read it when it was midnight and cold ...

    Dec 25, 2022


May you never steal, lie, or cheat. But if you must steal, then steal away my sorrows. And if you must lie, then lie with me all the nights of your life. And if you must cheat, then please, cheat death.
— An Unknown Bride, Leap Year