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AkuRashomon

I used corruption because I trusted you.

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Loneliness

    This poem is pretty relatable. I used to feel this way when quarantine and the pandemic hit. I like how this could be lyrical as well. And every time I ...

    Dec 5, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Words

    Wow, this poem is really nice. I like how you described words into many things and how words can be very powerful and impactful to the people you talk to. ...

    Dec 5, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Darker Than Destiny

    Hello, I'm here to review your story because I found it interesting even before I entered this site. I love how you show your characters but not fully because as ...

    Dec 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Take me Home

    Hello, @stygianmoon17. First of all, I like how you described and made home look nice. Sometimes you have to separate from other people and places and stay home. Staying in ...

    Dec 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: My Body is Not Poetry

    First of all, I like how you put your thoughts together making it into this poem. This poem is well-written and imaginative, like you can empathize with the person who ...

    Dec 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: My Cue

    Wow, who hurt you? I never been to a situation and relationship like this but, it's painful to read. It reminds me of those old sad love songs Mom and ...

    Dec 3, 2022
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Clown

    Wow! This is such a nice story to read when you don't know who you are. When I read it, I felt all the sad and heartbreaking emotions in those ...

    Dec 2, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Gabriel’s special Christmas!

    Hello, @vampricone6783. This is short story of yours was a very interesting and an unexpected one. I was like I want to read something related to Christmas so I went ...

    Nov 30, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy 18th Birthday YWS

    Wow! I love how much you put your effort, love and support to YWS. It is a nice poem I would like to frame these words on my wall but ...

    Nov 30, 2022


That's how we should measure our lives. Not in distance traveled, or time passed, or worlds conquered, but in moments... and the rush of joy—of grace—that exists within them.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)