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Re: A Wizard's Best Friend: Part 1/2
However, with age comes more experience, and sometimes we even learn from it. Hah! Made me laugh, good sentence. . It had come back bloody from my cheek. Kind of ...
Nov 5, 2012 -
Re: A Widely Broadcasted Event
YAY!!! I read the whole thing! So a few quick notes… Joel found it ridiculous she thought that of him and in the end didn’t even know why he had ...
Nov 5, 2012 -
Re: Desolate: Prologue-Chapter Two
His bald head is shiny in the florescent lighting, almost as his gleaming polished shoes I think it should be, “almost as much as his gleaming polished shoes.” The man ...
Nov 4, 2012 -
Re: Kingdoms 1: This Boring Life
Hey what's up! So here's my 2 cents... And everyone falls under the same cycle; lather, rinse and repeat just like a bunch of idiots. I actually really liked this ...
Nov 4, 2012 -
Re: CFT, Chapter 1.
the slight breeze billowing my hair as I led Kasey down Should be billowed She raised a shaky hand and shot me an indecent gesture, to which I only rolled ...
Nov 4, 2012 -
Re: Reflection
Wow that was actually really good and enjoyable. I liked the story, so here is just my input, take it or leave it… She passed out the tests to the ...
Nov 4, 2012