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  • General Articles Re: Reasons - 2

    Thank you for your critique on my last 'Reasons'. This is the continuation. I think something should happen, but my mind wanders.. a lot Mount Pleasant is really not the ...

    Dec 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Perfect Murder

    Oh, this is lovely. But could you possibly tell us what she was like before she went to her.. um.. 'grandma's' home? And there is something I do not get.. ...

    Dec 7, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Invisible (a one-time thing? prologue to a full story?)

    oh my god. This.. is amazing. I love this memoir. Or whatever you'd call it. You are somewhat like me, the only difference being that I've never been in a ...

    Dec 7, 2008
  • General Articles Re: The Halloween Game

    wow! that sounds very creepy.. If I wasn't watching a football game, i would read it again! Ah! The goblin sounds a bit freaky, but I'd still go into that ...

    Dec 7, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Get Out of the Water

    Amazing. Is this what your life is like? If so, then please, 'get out of the water'. Ha. The Emotion in this is just.. just unmistakable. It almost drove me ...

    Dec 7, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Reasons - 1

    Another morning awakened by the sound of my alarm clock. What time is it? 7:30? Oh, joy. Ten minutes and I must be ready, my hair fixed up, my make-up ...

    Dec 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: [deleted]

    Amazing. This is truly touching, to me at least. I am sorry that I have no constructive criticism, but I am all tired out for the night. Maybe tomorrow, though. ...

    Dec 7, 2008


This is a house of homes, a sacred place, by human passion made divinely sweet.
— Alfred Joyce Kilmer