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Re: Reasons - 2
Thank you for your critique on my last 'Reasons'. This is the continuation. I think something should happen, but my mind wanders.. a lot Mount Pleasant is really not the ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: The Perfect Murder
Oh, this is lovely. But could you possibly tell us what she was like before she went to her.. um.. 'grandma's' home? And there is something I do not get.. ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Invisible (a one-time thing? prologue to a full story?)
oh my god. This.. is amazing. I love this memoir. Or whatever you'd call it. You are somewhat like me, the only difference being that I've never been in a ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: The Halloween Game
wow! that sounds very creepy.. If I wasn't watching a football game, i would read it again! Ah! The goblin sounds a bit freaky, but I'd still go into that ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Get Out of the Water
Amazing. Is this what your life is like? If so, then please, 'get out of the water'. Ha. The Emotion in this is just.. just unmistakable. It almost drove me ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Reasons - 1
Another morning awakened by the sound of my alarm clock. What time is it? 7:30? Oh, joy. Ten minutes and I must be ready, my hair fixed up, my make-up ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
Amazing. This is truly touching, to me at least. I am sorry that I have no constructive criticism, but I am all tired out for the night. Maybe tomorrow, though. ...
Dec 7, 2008
