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Re: Favorites Hurt
Heya. Fellow n00b here. It's clear what your emotions are, and they are raw. That's one thing I like about this poem. :) The poem is structured in couplets, which ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Diluted
Hey. I don't really like the poem, but that might be my natural apathy towards poems that condemn present civilization. Oops. The meter is irregular, the rhymes break off in ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: More than friends?
Short and sweet, bookcutie. ... That username is really sweet. :D I don't have a lot to say - is that okay? It rhymes without breaking a sweat, but I ...
Mar 18, 2011