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Alexcarmine58

  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Railway Drifter

    Thanks for reviewing and critiquing my poem. I appreciate it alot.

    Apr 25, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dawn of Light

    I forgot to make this under a review so i resent it.

    Apr 23, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: There's No Soul in Retail

    I really liked the message of the poem and how marketing and retail are currently. The poem while short still delivers a powerful message. I also find the lines of ...

    Apr 23, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dawn of Light

    This was an amazing poem. I loved the rhymes and formating you used. This also poem used awesome imagery. In addition I like the italics it adds a nice touch ...

    Apr 22, 2019
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: vulnerability

    I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. I like the point it makes that there more to the world that meets the eye. I also like the final line " and for ...

    Apr 22, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: Pain

    Really enjoyed the poem it flowed well and had a good message.

    Apr 21, 2019


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