Aley

Hello Writing Wolf, First of all I'd like to say that I like what you're doing with the Memorial poems. I think it's a good way to work towards writing ...

Hello [in old spice voice]~ I think this is a pretty good example of a compartmentalized mind. It does a good job of following the mindset of someone going a ...

Hey, I'd like to start out with saying that I'm not one for the poetical in sentence structure unless it serves a specific purpose. I like my poems to read ...

Hello, My name's Aley and I'm here to help ^^ First off I'd like to say that you did a really good job of hiding the rhyme. There as a ...

Hi LunaClipse, First off I'd like to say that I think you did a good job with the rhymes in this poem. They're there, but they are not overbearing, which ...

I read the description and it said this was an experiment, so I wanted to see if I could pick out what the experiment was. My guess is that you're ...

Hey Nargles, I took some time reading over this poem both together, and each individual part. The reason being because how I see parenthesis is just a suggestion of another ...

Hello Aurora99 I can imagine this is probably a really slow mellow tone with that haunting sound to it, probably highly instrumental. I can't really think of anything else that ...

Hello wtppowers, You've got the plot down, that's for sure. I don't really think this is lacking in terms of what's happening in the story. I think you've got a ...

Yo~ You say rip, so I rip. Overall you've got a beautiful way of describing the artwork, but it doesn't really explain much about how the artwork documents the past. ...

Hey Unique, I saw you around in the chat so I thought I'd stop by and see what your writing was like. I think you've got a lot of emotion ...

Hello Annaclare, Welcome to YWS! I think you've got some interesting analogies here and with some work, this could be an even more powerful poem. I really think you've got ...

Hey retro~ I'm going to start out by saying thank you for writing about something a little more modern for the challenge. I think it was a smart play. I ...

Hi~ After realizing how much repetition you have in this poem, I started to look at it a lot closer to see if there was a pattern or a structure ...

Hi! Aley here for a quick review. First off I'd like to say that I think some of the ways you talk about this argument, devil vs angel, good vs ...