Aley

Thanks so much for the comments! I will have to consider them and see if i like the changes. I will probably keep "of life" because I wanted to break ...

XD You gunna spoof it or poof?

Taking what you said about the conflict between wanting to know and not opening the book [we talked about this in chat when you noticed the title is 'Notebook' and ...

I would be happy to elaborate. A palindrome is something that is the same backwards and forwards such as a word like "racecar" or a sentence like "Said he of ...

Alright! I just figured I'd comment on it cuz I had just gotten done reading some dickinson and she used spaces around her dashes so I wasn't sure =D

XD Thank you for the praise. [A note as a mod: try not to say nsfw things in anything but in an actual work cuz even if the work is ...

Hello! So I actually went over a few of the words for the reviewer one up if you want to take a look ^^ Mostly, I just went with words ...

Hello! Actually those are the made up words for the challenge. Bonfikify, Torsugine, Koronobite and Raggabon are all words that I created for this poem in an effort to follow ...

I didn't want my readers to know immediately, I wanted feedback like every other poem first. What verbs are too weak?

Thank you so much for your feedback! I didn't even realize I was doing that with the language. It's a really good point that you're making about consistency in poetry ...

So this was an experimental piece that was a challenge by Audy's Poetry Universe in which I had to write a poem, and then erase all of the adjectives and ...

Anytime!

Well, kind of? I mean, the action isn't in the movement from place to place, it is whenever we get somewhere, but you have the characters moving slowly and you ...

[Challenged by Nikayla to review myself, this is the result.] Hey Aley, So overall I like the blatant attitude of the lyrics, you know where you stand with this guy. ...

Thanks for the clarification! It definitely helps.