AlfredSymon

Great work Mr. Demon. What I noticed is the connection of your username with your poem. I think that's a great idea, your avatar by the way rocks in the ...

Wow.... What emotion and collapse. A perfect and slow drama that kept my heart pounding and at the same time sane and focused. Though a bit cut short, I felt ...

Aramond Swine He never listened. All was a game to him, women, life, money. His life has no restrictions, he lived like he will never die. His philosophy ends now. ...

Beautiful... Such suprise and slowness. But I think the poem would end that way. It can give a bii of unsatisfaction at the same time, suspense to your poem.

The Haikus of the Periodic Table of Elements By: Alfred Symon New haikus: 16, 32, 43, 59, 63, 90 1. Hydrogen The bubble flew up To the sky without much ...

The Seven Bloodbaths By: Alfred Symon I At first, she touched my neck Caressed it, slowly Kissed it After a while I found out I’m sired I wanted to be ...

Do you like Math? Well, I love it! And I will do everything to protect its rights. All I can comment to your poem about Math is... I love it! ...

I like your poem, but the theme is what I love. I loved how a man can have his own life in just a day and how breathtaking life can ...

I love your work. The tone of seriousness and a bit loneliness really fits the bitter taste of winter's gale. But I think it may be too long, since you ...