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  • Other » General, General Re: Create-a-word contest

    Word games, huh? These kind of writing activities enhance writing capabilities of writers to think creatively, it is also believed to be a brain exercise because of thinking excessively. 'nuff ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Lunatic

    Instead of putting puns and smile-o-meters, I'll be serious this time (not exactly ;) ) I understand the feeling when you feel like you don't belong, you're an alien . ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Broken

    Hi Shadow Lily! I believe Broken is as dark as your name! About Broken, I admire how you easily incorporated a song lyric with a title. It was...(emotional drum roll)...perfect ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Finding yourself

    Hey! What's with cats these days? I'm a fish person. Your poem, The One, is a very good read! Love, fear, freedom, escape; an all-in-one read huh! Here's a breakdown ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Casualties of War

    To Vietnam, Mr. Shade! To Vietnam... Hi this is Al. So I've read your work, and I found two things: A set of facts about Vietnam War and a new ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Halloween

    Hiya! Let me say this first, I think your problem is your age. I think you can sleep sounder when you're younger. Have you tried the Fountain of Youth or ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Night Life

    Good day Soccerstar! Well, well, well; we have an athlete here. I hate you, you know why? Because you made my favorite character become the killer! O come one! Anyways, ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Watching Me

    Hiya! This is Al back for a review, so please don't swallow me! About the story, I really look up to you, right now, at this moment because of the ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Limerick 1

    *giggle* About your poem *giggle* Limerick 1, well it's so darn funny! It's so hard to comment on short works like this one, the reason for this is that there ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Gravedigger

    Hooray! It's time for a celebration! Bring out the confetti! No pun intended... The reason for this is that I simply love your story! The history, the plot, the coldness, ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ugly Rainbows

    Hi, it's Al again, making a review! :) I love the idea of rainbows. So I was immediately intrigued when you titled it 'ugly' And then I found out that ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The End.

    Let me begin my review of "The End" with this: I am a Catholic. The next thing I would like to say is: It is important for us to keep ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drowning in the Crowd

    Hi Anna! I'm here to review "Drowning in the Crowd" :) As foreshadowed by the smiley, I like your poem. You went through a timeline of events wherein love, music ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Tuesdays with Morrie: A book review

    Good Tuesday! It is Tuesday in our country today, so hi! Tuesdays with Morrie was one of my most favored books. I've read it like, I dunno, let's just say, ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Winter's love.

    Good day! Alfred here. I like the over-all total of your work: -The structure is finely made - The words are properly chosen - The bold effects works! :) The ...

    Dec 12, 2011


Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times. It settles for less than perfection and makes allowances for human weaknesses.
— Ann Landers