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AliceInWonderland

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Vampire Ballads

    Wow... Eerie. Strangely, I love the way you kept repeating the lines, it gives a dark feeling to the poem. I do agree with your characters being a little flat, ...

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: One Mistake

    Most of the times it only takes one great line for me to love a poem, one line that leaves me breathless. You had that one line ;). You are ...

    Dec 5, 2009


When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
— LadyMysterio