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Re: The Just Ones
Thanks so much for your reviews. I'm going to try to work with your feedback!
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: The Play of Life
I totally come to feel what you feel when reading this poem. But you kind of leave me wondering about the last three lines. Care to elaborate?
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Darling, it's your name
Lovely. I wonder how you came up with this one. What inspired you? I agree with LaurynMitchell on the second stanza. Maybe replace little with another word? All in all, ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: To a star
Beautiful poem. Oh, how men burn before her gaze! They suffer so completely, That just fits. Beautiful!
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Swimming
Thank you so very much! I will take in your suggestions and I've always had difficulty with punctuation in my poems, so thanks for that too!
Dec 7, 2009