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Re: The girl, the boy, and the bartender in a wedding dress
I am very touched by your epiphany, it makes this a very strong topic for an essay. I caught like one or two spelling mistakes, but my spelling is much ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: The Teenager's Guide to Exorcism - Chapter One (2)
Hah! I like the line about the tree, that was perfect, and fits very well with the story you are building. I like that you took a chunk of this ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: The Teenager's Guide to Exorcism - Chapter One (1)
I'll be honest: Pretty awesome, Paul. The title is great, it's like you have to read teh story, it's just that good of a hook. I love the introduction, it's ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1: Irritum
Other than some grammar and spelling mistakes (which others have lovingly pointed out, so I won't do it again) I thought it was great. Maybe it's because I'm a film ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Inter
I'll be honest, I actually had to check your age about half way through this. You got so much into the mind of the chatacer that I actually thought it ...
Aug 4, 2011