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Re: Loveless Dreams
Name: Lilly Age: 19 Gender: Female Species: Tainted Dream Creator Appearance: Lilly can actually change her appearance according to the nightmare to which she creates, but the one she uses ...
Apr 24, 2009 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 1
I really like how you wrote this for two reasons: 1) I am an overweight person and you pretty much mailed it on the head how someone like that would ...
Apr 23, 2009 -
Re: I've Got Your Picture *One*
It had been three and a half years since I had seen or really heard from Jack. He didn’t even come home for the holidays, claiming that he was much ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: dealeated
Well, I really liked what you did, and this isn't much of a review since I'm not really much of a nitpicky person. I really enjoyed it and I hope ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: Life, Love, and Chocolate (Ch. 1)
I thought that this was really good :) I really liked how much detail you went into about Clay, although I would like to know a tad bit more about ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: I'll Ruin Her
Whoa :shock: . I did NOT see that one coming. Her mother? Damn, that sucks. If it's yours, I'm really sorry that something like that happened to you. No one ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: I am Mentally Ill
WOW!! I thought that that was excellent!! I really like how you "tried" to explain how her hair was, how you said that it was something you had to see ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: Every Angel Has To Fall Chapter 1 Pt 3
OH MY GODDNESS!!! I really like this story so far, and usually I'm not the kind of girl who goes for that kind of thing. I really like the way ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School
Name: Ember (Em, Emmy) Rose Barakath Age: 17 Grade: 11 Description:[url] Personality: Emmy is the girl who's nice and quiet, but if you make her mad, guard your loins boys. ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Horrors You've Never Seen Before 2
When I woke up later, I was being jerked around in a carriage, with a splitting headache and my hands in shackles. I looked to see Olga and Anya across ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: First Chapter of My Romantic Comedy
I was not going to be able to write for a while for I was sick. I would write it, either, "because I was sick", or "for a while, for ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: The Little Girl in the Basement
When we first got to the castle a month ago, I immediately fed Pink the most extravagant dinner the poor thing probably had. If I had written that, I would've ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: Pomegrante Seeds- i (his world)
WOW!! I really liked it! I love this kind of thing anyway, but you write it really well. I would like to know how they look though, but keep it ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: Horros You've Never Seen Before 1
It isn't that great right now, but it will get better. I promise. The day is July 16, the year 1918. That was the night in which my family and ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: I've Got Your Picture *Prologue*
2005 Today was one of the worst days of my life. My best friend Jack was leaving me. I tried so hard not to be bitter. It was a big ...
Apr 14, 2009