AliyahPillage

I liked the poem although... and this might just be me.. I didn't really understand the meaning of it, you're probably wondering how someone can like something yet not understand ...

Broken hearts, falling tears, you know why I'm frozen here. You think I'll forgive, but I won't forget, say you want to keep, but I will not let Don't try ...

This is the first human I successfully drew but not the first human I've drawn I did this free hand and it took me forever but I did it post ...

I like the idea of the poem but I don't really like how it didn't rhyme at first until the second stanza and then it didn't much after that I ...

Okay, I just wanted to say that this is only a small amount of my novel so far, but I will have more up as soon as possible, I'm editing ...

Okay, I loved the poem but like anyone I thought I'd give you some pointers you know things you could improve on and things that you did well. Okay, so ...

I love the meaning of the poem that the person is otherwise alone but I find it very repetitive no one to tease and no one to taunt This was ...

I loved this poem, it was short, but to the point and it made sense. I just don't understand why you used dashes instead of comas, that's the only thing ...

These are pictures of my friends that I posed.

I love this, although I'm not sure if it means that you would have ended twilight right there... I say this with caution for fear of being eaten alive by ...

I thought this was a very nice story, I enjoyed reading it from the very start, Would I have married him? Probably Would I have become a vampire? Maybe. Did ...

This was a very nice poem, I enjoyed the beginning of it the most, keep working.

I found this to be a very lovely poem, the beginning didn't make much sense to me although it might mean something personal to you. other than that keep writing ...

I love the poem but I would consider checking the punctuation and every line I noticed started with a capital letter, if there is a coma the line doesn't need ...

First off, it was a lovely poem to read, just a few things to concider She is Blond hair, blue eyesg lossed lips, glistening smile. Straight teeth, pearly white 67 ...